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You heard a noise and woke up instantly due to being a light sleeper. You sit up and look around the room for the cuase of the sound. Nothing. You scan the room once again just in case and see your window wide open. "Did i open that?" You thought. but you didnt remember doing so. You shake it off and get up to go shut the window. Once back in bed you try to go back to sleep but have the strangest feeling that your being watched. You dissmissed it and close your eyes.

"Go to sleep."

Your eyes snap open and you see a tall figure standing over you. He had shoulder length black hair, black ringed eyes as if they had been burnt away, and a horrifying smile carved into his cheeks."Hey hes kinda sexy-DAFUCK IS WRONG WIT YOU (NAME)?!?! THIS MAN IS ALL UP IN YO ROOM WATCHIN YOU IN YO SLEEP AND YOU THINKIN HE SEXY! AINT NOBODY GOT TIME FOR THAT!!"
 Worst of all he was holding a large kitchen knife in his hand. You tried to scream but his hand covered your mouth imediatly. "Well that wont do you any good, now will it doll face?" he said. He placed the knife up to your throat. You quickly began to shed tears and shut your eyes to hold them back, waiting for the moment you would feel his knife bite into your skin and it would be all over. but, it never came. You slowly open your eyes to see what he was doing. He was just standing over you with his hair over his eyes so you couldnt quiet read his emotion. Well, its not like you could anyways due to the lack of eyelids. He slowly removed his hand from your mouth and droped his knife on the ground.

"I..... I cant do it!!! Your to beautiful! I mean Hot! I mean sexy! NOOO STOP IT I DONT KNOW WHAT I MEAN BUT I JUST CANT DO IT!!!" He backed up  against your wall and covered his face with his hands. You sat up, now curious as to the self war that your murderer was having with himself. " I MEAN YOUR JUST LIKE EVERY OTHER GIRL IVE KILLED RIGHT?!?! A STUPID, COWARDLY, GREEDY WHOAR?? SO THEN WHY CANT I KILL YOU?!?!" (Yeah ok he has issues...) You tried to process the line of insults and compliments you just recieved when he was up again. But this time he jumped on top of you and stradeled you tightly. His face was extremley close to yours. You blushed out of instinct. "I guess it becuase im somehow attracted to you..." He then closed the space in between you in a sweet kiss. The kiss lasted a while, long enough for you to melt and kiss back. eventualy you two broke away for air. "Whats your name doll face?" he asked. "(N-Name).." "(Name)" he tested it out and then nodded his head in approval. "Its perfect" He leaned down and kissed you again. This time it was short.

"Your mine now, (Name)" He said before picking you up again and escaping with out your window. 

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Redrose5634 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist
."Hey hes kinda sexy-DAFUCK IS WRONG WIT YOU (NAME)?!?! THIS MAN IS ALL UP IN YO ROOM WATCHIN YOU IN YO SLEEP AND YOU THINKIN HE SEXY! AINT NOBODY GOT TIME FOR THAT!!" I found that soooo fucking funny!!!
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I was hoping someone would xD
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animeloveralexa Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Yay!!!! Kidnapped by Jeff!!!!!!!!
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Carrie0919 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Lol. At first it's, "I..... I cant do it!!! Your to beautiful! I mean Hot! I mean sexy! NOOO STOP IT I DONT KNOW WHAT I MEAN BUT I JUST CANT DO IT!!!". Then it's, " I MEAN YOUR JUST LIKE EVERY OTHER GIRL IVE KILLED RIGHT?!?! A STUPID, COWARDLY, GREEDY WHOAR?? SO THEN WHY CANT I KILL YOU?!?!" But I mean it's Jeff so I don't mind. Although if it's the real him, I would go up and slap him.
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HorrorGamesFan905 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that was quick X3
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Sarahbrine Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me: BIG BROTHER HEROBRINE HELP ME! JEFF IS TRYING TO KIDNAP ME!
Jeff: oh fuck
Herobrine: JEFF GET YOUR ASS BACK HERE!
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:iconcharcoalman:
charcoalman Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Why do you want to have sex with someone who kills children and looks like a fish?
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Aestas-Hiems Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I red it aloud. And rolled over the bed of laughter. Literally. Thanks for making my day, dude. <3
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Laruna-Silverfox Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.....im being kidnapped.......


me: uhh jeff you know my dads slendy right?
jeff:........shit
slendy: jeff get your ass back here with my dauther!!!
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Sarahbrine Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice 
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Ajones123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Lol
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BlackCatShadows Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student General Artist
For some reason, whenever I read fan fictions like this, I always read it like "Your mine now, Name" like Name is your actual name.
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Ask-Bella-Drowned Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
xDD Same~ <3
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Well that escalated quickly didn't it o_o
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KittyKatGurl321 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AINT NOBODY GOT TIME FOE DAT! 
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Me: Whore! I will kill you.
Other me(insane me) :No he so cute.
Me: I don't give to shits.
insane me:no let him live. It'll be okay.
Me: Fuck no. (moves towards Jeff to kill him)
insane me: Are you okay?
me: Wait what? Did I just say that?
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lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
-decks jeff- who are you calling a whore, shit-face?!?!?
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Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Yay kindnapped
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime doll(:
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Ciel-phantomhive3 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
How about rotating Tuesdays and thursdays
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CreepypastaGirl189 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Artist
Oh god Jeff Ur too kinky ^/////////^
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MissUnderstood7227 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Artist
I just got kidnapped o_o....WELL AS LONG AS IT'S BY JEFF I'M OKAY :D :happybounce: 
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Suki-ai-chan Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ain't nobody got time for that lol
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Of course he has issues! Blame the bullies!
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Damn Randy....
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
I made a story called "Jeff's revenge" if you're interested in something that involves Randy and his posse getting hurt. It's in the journal section in my profile though
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Okay! Im going to add you to my watch list so I can get to it quicker.

 

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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Did you try my story yet?
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Ok
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Suki-ai-chan Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
0-0 ;3
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gothchick98 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg this is too cute! I'd totally be blushing like a tomato the whole tone XD
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gothchick98 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*time
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RileyXCreepyPasta200 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Artist
why did you make this WHAT IF A BOY READ THIS and im a girl just wondering....

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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD I made my boyfriend read it :-)
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Liisi55 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Love it! <3
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whiterockshooter15 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
*Is unable to speak due to laughing like a hyena* teh fluff.XD
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NightwingRobin01 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it! <3
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!
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StarlightTraveler Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, my first thought would be- "what do you think I'm trying to do? Throw a beach party?"
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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RaionViper Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Interesting. I liked the way you portrayed the reader's thoughts.
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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RaionViper Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
No Problem!
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PepePeky Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Well that escalated quickly o.o
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I tried to make it so that his emotions were kinda running wild and he didnt know how to handle them. So he kinda did what he thought he should do.
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Damn it i ment writing
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Ladybugbecca429 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice story.

It was very interesting to read. :)

But if Jeff were to seriously take me out of my bed and leave the house with me, I would probably scream something like "PUT ME DOWN I WANT TO SLEEP!!!" But oh well. :XD:
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JeffTheSexyKiller1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!! and i wold probobly do the same thing i would say somethin like "OH HELL NO IT IS TO DAMN LATE FOR THIS YOU CAN EITHER STAY HERE AND WAIT FOR ME TO WAKE UP OR COME BACK AT 1:30 PM WHEN I WAKE UP!" But thats just my insanity :)
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